Tuesday, March 24, 2015

Friday, March 6, 2015

Week 6 Comments

Partner: Evan LeClair

1. For the male character, I like how you did the pose- it matches the character that you were trying to draw quite well.
2. The arm is at a fairly odd angle (it almost looks like it's coming out of his neck), and some of the lines make it confusing to tell where some parts begin and some parts end.
3. Clean up the lines a little bit and fix the arm slightly- actually make the hand in front of his mouth like in the image.

5. I like how you did the female body, and I was able to recognize how it was supposed to be small- for the body, the proportions were accurate. It was easy to tell that they were more of a young child than a woman.
6. The head on the female character is drawn a bit too big- they almost look as if they were meant to be drawn in an almost chibi kind of style.
7. Scale down the head to match the body, or scale up the body to match the head. Remember to use the scale lines to accurately size the body!